A human is a very sneaky person and can do a whole lot with their emotions. For example us humans really can deal with our emotions in sneaky ways. How is it possible that there is a lot of us humans that know how to hide our emotions. Yea there are some of us that wont expose any type of emotion and can really have a wall in front of us and we wont show emotion. Everyone deals with their emotions a different way and some of us just hide them I am one of those people that when I can I will hide my emotions I wont show them I do not want to show them, its just something I choose to do I think showing my emotions shows weakness. I am a very soft person and when I can be strong I want to take advantage of that. I believe most of us who hide our emotions is so people wont see what we are hiding maybe we are going threw a lot and do not want people to see those things and begin judging us. Hiding your emotions also can be something bad I learned that because you are keeping so much to yourself their will be a point when you just explode and have to let it all out at one point. You get fed up with all of it and you need to expose your emotions.
Humans display their emotions you can see it in their expression. Have you not seen a person and they look very down you can tell by their face that something is bothering them and that there is just something wrong. When you see someone crying you also see that there is something wrong. They are hiding something they are feeling a emotion. And when you see someone crying its usually sadness you really do not know what is wrong with them until you talk to them and figure out what is wrong. Emotions are part of what makes a human you use their 5 senses to show emotion and also reflect emotion . That is just how a human works and how it has a reaction to them. Display emotions by crying be mad bitchy cranky sad glad loved and smiling J
Have you ever sat down and thought how you deal with your emotions? Humans have a variety things that they do to deal with their emotions or feelings some of us do dangerous thing others just can plug in their earphones and start listening to music. It matters how we deal with them. It matters that what we do is safe for us. It helps if we have someone to talk to and someone that is their for us. Do you react to your emotions in a positive manner? Have you seen how animals react to an emotion you can really see it in them and it is visible and noticeable although animals are kind and very lovable they have a heart they also do have a sense of emotion. Unlike us humans we expose some similarities to how dogs react to them and how we tend to react to them. We are unique with our emotions and our emotions our what makes us human not robots.
Changes in your emotions can determine in something you want to do and then something happens and the emotion keeps you from doing what you have had planned to do , sometimes emotions take over your decisions and that makes a slight change to who you are. Because people notice the way you change. Your emotions can change you slowly but also a big 360 change. It can be drastically or just a phase. If you cant control your emotions then you have no power to do anything because you are not thinking clearly and your letting your emotions get the best of you and you should not. That is how most humans are whether emotions are good or bad happy or sad it has a big part in what makes a human, because humans have the heart and mentality to get influenced and to get hurt and be sensitive. While something that is not human does not. Some humans can feel deprived.
Uncontrollable emotions some humans can get help from other humans to get through their emotions it is a big help. Love emotions are uncontrollable you cant control who you love it is a natural instinct. When I say a human can help another human for example you had a really hard break up you really loved someone and it ended, your heart broken but then another human can come and slowly make you fall in love and help you forget about the other who broke your heart and you wont have the emotion of feeling heart broken or lonely. Depression is an emotion that can be controllable by medication and therapy and help from a loved one. A dog can feel depression but with help of a human it helps them go through the depression and feel happy.
What makes a human; human I believe having emotions makes a human , like the examples I gave on how us humans we can hide emotions, how we display them. How we can react to them in a positive manner. How our emotions can change us. Another example I gave was how sometimes our emotions are uncontrollable. All of these things lead to how we are and how special we are and that makes who we are because if we do not show emotion we will be plain it wont make our personalities, whether our emotions are sad or happy and jolly. The emotion we show displays a lot of who we are. And makes up our personality. That is what I think makes a human; human emotions.
OK, so I've read this essay through twice now and the second time was much better than the first. I got your ideas much more clearly and I felt that you had come a lot closer to hitting the topic...the SECOND time I read.
ReplyDeleteThe FIRST time I read it, I was pretty confused and I really didn't pick up enough of what you were trying to talk about. And why was that?
Because of the SENTENCES. There are lots of sentences here that are strung together into run-ons, and it really distracts from what you're trying to get across. When one sentence keeps going and going then it gets harder to know what the writer is trying to say because they haven't used punctuation right and then you have a hard time tracing their ideas because the sentence gets so complicated and they're including so much stuff by just stringing thoughts together one after another after another that even if the thoughts are on topic and help to explain what they're talking about and give good examples and show that they're developing the idea with details and stuff, you can forget what the beginning of the sentence was even about and then you get confused.
See? :)
In the next posts you write, I want you to slow down, go over them once you've finished first drafts, and take a look at the SENTENCES, one at a time. You may need to break them down into shorter pieces. If you need my help with this, ask me and we'll work on it together. But this is an important issue for you to practice! It will help you express your thoughts much more effectively.